Three deer strolled casually across the road. I breathed a sigh of relief. No slamming of brakes. No sliding bags. No coffee spilled. I had already hit my brakes when the rear outer red lights flashed on the car in front of me.
And before that, I had just mentioned to a friend on Voxer that it was either
0: dark : thirty OR
0: deer : thirty.
I guess I knew the most accurate time. No rain so deer were moving. Slow and steady for the next four miles down Deer Alley.
And before that, I had just commented on an open gate: “Will those cows be out on the road, in the ditch, or behind the house?”
And before that, I was driving down the road en route to the office for my early morning appointment in the tech department. I was sick and tired of issues with posting my slices 3/4 of the days of the March SOLSC.
And before that, I was racing Mya to the end of the driveway and amazed (daily) by the fact that her four legs regularly beat my four cylinder Vibe.
And before that, I was packing my work bag.
- a Dell laptop
- a Chromebook plus
- an iPad mini
- a Samsung phone
“Did I have all the necessary devices for the day?” I wondered.
And before that, I was enjoying a peaceful second cup of coffee. Silence. Coffee. Peace. Thinking time. No noise. No devices. No conversation with Mya.
And before that, I was packing my lunch of a granola bar and a turkey and jalapeno cheese wrap. Plus a travel cup of coffee.
And before that, I was drinking that first cup of coffee for the morning. Savoring the smell of those coffee beans. Hearing the drip. And waiting eagerly for that first jolt of caffeine!
And before that, shower . . . shampoo . . . and the rest of the story is not available for print.
Do you always tell a story in chronological order?
Have you tried reverse order?
Does it feel uncomfortable to you?
What structure might you try as an innovation?
Thank you, Betsy, Beth, Deb, Kathleen, Lanny, Lisa, Melanie, and Stacey for this weekly forum and the #SOLSC that runs from March 1 to the 31st. Check out the writers, readers and teachers here.