Spring? Winter?
Tuesday is the day to share a “Slice of Life” with Two Writing Teachers. Check out the writers, readers and teachers here.
My favorite picture from Facebook yesterday was this:
Saturday –
80 degrees and sunny –
Washed the car
Ran errands
Went for a walk
Sunny, bright and cheery
Enjoyed the weather.
Sunday –
60 degrees and rainy –
Revised class on moodle
Set up grade book
Selected learning activities
Dreary, dark and gloomy
Sent emails
Made lists.
Monday –
33 degrees and snow on the ground –
Dog would not go outside
Warmed up the car
Drug out the winter coat
Found gloves
Cold, bone-chilling and windy
Sent “snowy picture” to kids.
Tuesday morning –
Full moon and currently 26 degrees –
Predicted high in the 40’s.
Iowa
Weather
Wait a day,
Wait an hour,
Wait a minute,
It WILL change!
What will tomorrow’s weather bring?
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Is your spring weather unpredictable? Warm? Sunny? Meeting your expectations?
Slice of Life 31: Farewell Finale
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Wow! 31 consecutive days of writing is coming ot an end . . . What do I say? What am I thinking? What will I do with my free time?
My process: I set up a folder on my desk top where I saved pictures that I wanted to consider adding to blogs. I created a word document and listed “Topics that I can blog about.” I drafted some posts in Word and some directly in WordPress. I did some “flash drafting.” I watched “Be Inspired” and the Classroom SOLSC14 for writing tips/ideas. My routine included drafting my posts the evening before needed and then the morning of posting, I reviewed, revised and edited.
Some posts seemed to write themselves. Those were on topics that I had already spent some time thinking about. Newer topics meant that I nothing written ahead of time. Those posts took longer to construct unless the topic had been the focus of conversation previously. Days spent traveling meant that I planned ahead and wrote multiple posts in advance.
If you have been following this month, you may recall that I began March with a post about alphabet books and the fact that I like to collect them because they are so neat and tidy. I also like to collect or organize my work. Sometimes I organize by color, sometimes I organize by numbers, and sometimes I organize by charts. So for this finale, I have assembled a table in order to review the “current data.” (Just a little OCD!)
Slice | Title | Content | Format (*idea from TWT) |
1 | March Challenge: Slice of Life | Alphabet as an Organizer | Narrative/ Info |
2 | ABC’s of Reading | Joys of Reading | ABC poem |
3 | Home | Defining Home | Narr. Quotes and info |
4 | “Change of Plans” | Waiting | Narr. Quote and poem |
5 | Coming Home | Celebration | Narr. Pictures/poem |
6 | Bucket List | List | *poem / Info |
7 | Exhaustion | A “To Do” list | poem |
8 | Studying Student Writing | Content – 3rd grade Ts | Narrative |
9 | #EdCampIowa and “Can Do” Prep for Writing | Talk Before Writing (Conversation Lines) | Info |
10 | Embrace Change | Quote & Dr. Seuss | Picture and words= pt. |
11 | Challenges | Typical responses to challenges | Info |
12 | Tenacity | Dad and turning point | Narrative |
13 | From Challenges to Turning Points | TCRWP and turning points | *AGC, Info |
14 | Road Trip with Dad | Moving Home from College | Narrative (cum. Poem)C &C |
15 | Two Truths and a Lie | Comparisons: Dad and Me | Reader interaction |
16 | The Truth and the Answers | Comparisons: Dad and Me | Answers / Explan. |
17 | Family | Family | Narr. Acrostic poem |
18 | Support Systems | Thanks (metaphor tree) | Info |
19 | Hunger Games | Books vs. Movies | Info w/ poll |
20 | Changing Seasons | Sports cycles | poem |
21 | 6:15 on Friday | AM events | *Poem |
22 | Saturday | TCRWP and data (19) | Info |
23 | How much reading is enough? | Reflective questions | Quotes |
24 | Maximizing Instructional Time | Talk and small groups | Twitter quotes |
25 | Are you in the pool? | Writing your story | Quotes/blogs |
26 | Try it, You WILL LIKE it! | Memory (inner talk) | Narrative/inner dialogue |
27 | Summers | Memories | *Poem |
28 | Revising or Editing | CCSS.Anchor.W.5 | Info |
29 | :: right now :: | Status check | Narr. *Verb list/poem |
30 | Thank You! | Thanks | Info |
31 | Farewell Finale | Reflection on March Writing | Narr, Info |
Trying to “label posts” for the final column was difficult. Writing is not always just “one” form or format. Multiple forms can be compiled very easily in a blog post format. I had several goals with this challenge:
1. Write 31 posts Done
2. Write some stories / narratives 11 / 31
3. Write some poetry 11 / 31
4. Add pictures more frequently to my blog 11 / 31
5. Continue to grow my own knowledge in writing (tried something new * 5/31)
6. Continue to support teachers who teach reading/writing 8/3 1
Because I did not write any of my goals in a measurable, SMART format, my thoughts about whether I have “met” my goals is purely subjective. I do believe that just like a story arc, I have moved to a different point as I end March with more frequent and more proficient writing – a different place than where I began on March 1st.
Thanks again for being a part of my writing journey!
I would highly recommend that ALL “Slicers” consider having a twitter presence! One more communication tool!
Slice of Life 30: Thank You!
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Kudos to the fabulous team at Two Writing Teachers and all the support that they assembled for this challenge! Being a part of a community like this makes it “easier” to continue on each day! Thanks to both Stacey Shubitz, SOLSC14, and Anna Gratz Cockerille, Classroom SOLSC14, for their great “Be Inspired” ideas! Thanks to the support team as well. I had many questions for Elsie and her supportive responses soothed my apprehensions!
I jumped into this challenge because of two twitter friends, Julieanne Harmatz (AKA @jarhartz ) who blogs at “To Read To Write To Be” and Catherine Flynn (AKA @flynn_catherine) who blogs at “Reading to the Core.” Check out the past slices on the blogs of these two talented ladies!
Thanks to all “Slicers” who read and commented on my blog during the “Slice of Life Challenge.” Special thanks to those who commented a LOT including: Julieanne, Tara, Catherine, Anna, Elsie, Stacey and Carol.
Writing every day for a month has helped me continue to work on my own writing. I will reflect on forms and topics tomorrow in my final post for the month. It’s possible that I will join “Slice of Life Tuesday” or another regular weekly posting. I must do some work on my calendar to determine feasibility over the next couple of months as I modify an online graduate course and also plan for summer work. This month has shown me, again, how important it is to both respond to other bloggers and/or tweet out their links. The connections in the community are THE BEST!
But most importantly, this Slice of Life Challenge has confirmed my belief that teachers of writing must also be writers!
Again, Thanks! This has been fun! This has been great learning! This has fueled my writing soul!
Slice of Life 28: Revising or Editing
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
What is Revision? What is Editing?
How would you explain the difference between these two processes? In the CCSS, they are listed in the same anchor standard: “W.5. Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.”
What is revising?
Once we define “revising” as literally meaning to “see again,” to look at something from a fresh, critical perspective, we can begin to teach it. I used to use instruction that included “two stars and a wish” where partners respond with two elements of writing they like and one they wish that could be changed to strengthen the writing work. It wasn’t specific enough.
How do we make the revision more visible to students? Revising word choice has seemed easier to model. “Circle two words in the work that seem repetitive, tired, or not clear. Brainstorm possible words that would be stronger. Make a decision to change at least one word in your writing piece.”
What was missing?
I wondered if the instruction needed to focus a bit more on the “why” for revision in order to emphasize that the purpose is to make the writing stronger. Students studying written work answered: “Which of these two paragraphs is a stronger description? Be prepared to state the specific details that are your evidence of strength.” The before and after paragraphs are side by side here as they were projected on the screen:
Which would you rather read? Why? How did those sentences change? What does their “revising language” sound like when the students are talking about revising?
I did show the students the following list that I created when I brainstormed some ideas about how this old house looked and the underlined phrases showed where I had used them.
How the house looked?
- paint peeling
- cracked windows
- weeds around the house
- big house that takes up most of the lot
- two stories
- shutters falling off the side of the house
So this revision instruction began with students studying two pieces of writing to see the revising changes and then ended with showing them how a brainstormed list of “how it looked” was used for specific ideas that were added, removed and substituted. The students loved that they knew the house was “old” without saying the word “kind of like a riddle.”
Student revision is now about more than just moving a sentence around as students talk about changing words or phrases as they move, add, remove or substitute in the revision process.
What is editing?
Editing has often been explained as what a copy editor does to fix up the writing to get it ready for publication. The goal is to make the errors so few that the reader’s thinking is not interrupted as he/she reads. Typical conventions include capitalization, punctuation, spelling and usage. In the Core those are found in the Language Anchor Standards:
L. 1. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
L. 2. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
How does instruction provide opportunities to “self-edit” in order to strengthen their writing? Technology makes this easier as squiggles under a word alert me to check the spelling, but students need to be doing the work of “editing” – not the teacher with a red pen.
How does that instruction work? One way to literally show the difference between revising and editing might be to teach some acronyms as a part of a mini-lesson after a lesson in revising like the one above where students did the work to figure out “how” the revision happened.
I believe this photo came from a #tcrwp friend but I apologize because I cannot credit the owner as I was not saving the source or the date at that time. Let me know if you recognize the source as I would love to add the correct attribution!
How are your students strengthening their writing by revising or editing? Do they “independently” revise or edit?
Slice of Life 21: 6:15 on a Friday
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Today’s idea courtesy of Stacey under 3/20/14 “Be Inspired” with original from @MrsDay75 “8:15 on a School Day.”
6:15 on a Friday
It’s 6:15 am
Tick, tock
Pour a cup of coffee
Tick, tock
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Check the weather
Tick, tock
Check email
Tick, tock
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Check my Twitter Stream.
Retweet,
Favorite,
Mention,
Check for slices.
Tick, Tock
*
Grab the carafe
Pour a second cup
Watch the news
Begin my list
Tick, tock.
*
Let the dog out
Feed and water
Check my grocery list
Tonight’s the night
to grocery shop.
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Start the car.
Hit defrost.
Turn up the heat
Calendar says, “spring”
The day says, “cold.”
Tick, tock.
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Rinse out coffee cup,
Fill travel mug,
Brush my teeth,
Pack up and GO,
On the road,
Off to school!
Tick, tock!
Slice of Life 20: Changing Seasons
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Changing Seasons
A pumpkin
Five pumpkin pushers
A net
A court
A tournament bracket
Forty minutes on the clock.
And it’s one of the “First Four”
Where the team
Has to play its way into the NCAA Tournament.
A senior
Leading scorer
Held to two points
In the first half.
Second leading scorer
In the history of the university.
Second only to his father
Must come alive
During the second half.
Down, down,
Down the floor
Basket.
Down, down,
Down the floor
Basket.
Foul.
Missed opportunities.
Swish.
Who will win?
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Overtime
Injury
Dayton
Dry spell
No baskets
Many fouls
Dashing hopes
Winner advances to Raleigh.
New Day Today
But wait,
Grapplers in the wings
NCAA today in Oklahoma
Winners all ten
Ready and primed
Time to shine!
A new day!
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Hope,
Might have beens and could have beens erased,
Begin Anew!
163 days til the gridiron opens . . . .
The sports cycle continues!
Do changing sports seasons impact your lives? Or are you more interested in SPRING?
Slice of Life 19: Hunger Games
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
For a bit of entertainment this weekend we went to the show and it was especially great because we were together watching this movie series again!
Stunning visual effects! Are the characters still believable? And consistent across the first two movies? How well did the movie capture the contents of the book?
We both agreed that the book was better than the movie. As bookaholics we may be a bit biased. Isn’t the book always better than the movie?
Hunger Games?
Catching Fire?
Mockingjay?
A trilogy to debate. Evan says Hunger Games is the best book of the series. I say Mockingjay is better. Two different votes – neither wins . . .
Let’s see what the readers say! Which one is truly the best book? Which movie is your favorite so far?
Please take this quick 3 item survey (no names will be captured)!
Click on the survey link here.
Which is usually better: the book or the movie? Why do you think so?
Slice of Life 18: Support Systems
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Exactly how big are the roots that are needed for a healthy tree?
Of course, it will depend on the tree. What about this image? The “invisible to the eye” root system of the tree is bigger than the visible part of the tree. Is that possible in other “root” or “support” systems?
How big is the “support system” or root of a family with a member deployed overseas?
It’s huge! And the sole purpose of this post is to say:
In our family, the system is amazing. Everyone that attended Evan’s wedding last year is a part of that support system. From the quilts (Aunts Pat Mary and Grandma) to the Kolaches (Aunt Mary again) and even Grandma Twilah who pitched a hand to help out! The little kids were entertaining at the rehearsal dinner, the wedding, reception and dance! What a celebration to begin a new life as a couple!
While deployed, there were boxes, cards and thoughtful remembrances that kept the family tree standing despite the distance and the long, lonely days. Thanks to Mom and my brothers and sisters and their families who contributed to those efforts! To my family who welcomed Julie with open arms to the Marek and Ruth Christmas, “Thanks!” is just one little word with millions of thoughts attached! You are all greatly appreciated.
To the teacher of my great nephew Benen, “You are amazing!” His class sent cards for Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas, and Valentine’s Day. Evan and Julie recorded a “thank you” which became a part of the school celebration for Veteran’s Day starring Benen! You’ve never met Evan but yet took the time to honor and recognize a soldier away from home and from a community half-way across the state! Priceless!
To my friends and co-workers, thanks for asking about and listening to my stories about Evan and Julie. It made the 248 days more bearable.
To Allison, thanks for searching for soldiers to support! Also thank you for your continued contact and support of both Julie and me as well!
To my fellow “Slicers” who I have YET to meet – special thanks for your comments and thank you’s for Evan’s service. Simply taking the time to comment is/was greatly appreciated!
It’s hard to find words to say “Thank You” to my son for his service, sacrifice and patriotism, but there are many others that I also need to thank!
The real hero who must be recognized is Evan’s wife, Julie. What a trooper! Not fun to have a husband of two months shipped overseas. Lots of love, laughter and tears did help you through those long months of an overseas deployment! (and frequent conversations with the dogs, Toby Ryan and Millie Ann!) Julie won the prize for the best “duct tape” and decorated boxes!
And then the shining stars behind Julie every step of the way – her parents, John and Debbie; and her sisters, Melissa and Keri and all their families. Julie’s parents were there to see Evan off and to see him safely home. Keri, Alma and Melissa also were there for the celebratory homecoming. Aunt Lisa, Andy and Matthew were also there for the homecoming dinner and tons of support. Your love is visible in all your actions and words.
Like the tree roots there are many invisible supports as well: the FRG groups, the prayers at churches across the country and many other community groups that routinely support deployed service member’s families.
With my deepest gratitude!
and my sincerest apologies for anyone that I left out! (I blame “my increasing age” and “failing memory”!) As well as my thanks to any readers who are at present or who in the past have been part of a soldier’s support systems!
With this metaphor, is it possible for a person to be both a branch on the tree and a part of the root or support system? What do you think? (Add your thoughts to the comments!)
Slice of Life 17: Family
My son Evan, his wife Julie and me – all thankful to have him home after his nine month deployment.
This has been a fun weekend With the kids. It went by very quickly, 48 hours of family, food, movie, and shopping.
fun
altogether
mom and kids
important
life events adding to our
yesterdays!
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!)
Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna, and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .