#SOL14: Family Weekend FUN!
Tuesday is the day to share a “Slice of Life” with Two Writing Teachers. Check out the writers, readers and teachers here. Thanks to Stacey, Anna, Beth, Tara, Dana and Betsy for creating a place for us to work collaboratively.
It was a huge family weekend. My youngest brother, the baby in the family, graduated summa cum laude with his BS in Business Friday night with Mom plus three siblings in attendance. We had a fabulous pre-party with food galore: veggie and fruit pizzas, veggies and dip, sandwiches, cupcakes, pies, sweet potato cake, and a wee bit of Uncle Leo’s homemade wine. Here’s a collection of photos from the festivities!
Everyone had read last week’s slice (Mom’s birthday post) except Mom so she read that later in the evening. She wondered why I had left out the “riding the bull” picture. That led me to wondering about the “Kiss the Blarney Stone” picture. Darn, again. . . . all on an external hard drive at home – not where I am currently located. I discovered this picture of orchids that Mom drew in a class on her Mediterranean cruise and decided to share it. She has so much artistic talent!
Saturday was a fabulously great family day with our departure from Ankeny at 6:15 am for the Iowa Homecoming festivities. Drumline, Alumni Band, Hawkeye Marching Band – what a treat to see and hear so much great entertainment! And the “FUN that was had by all! You truly can see just about anything and everything at a collegiate football game. It was my sister’s first game sitting as a spectator in historic Kinnick Stadium, as well as niece Courtney’s first Hawkeye football game so the high-scoring first quarter and ultimate win were greatly appreciated!
Simple things like late lunch after the game, picking up Grandma and heading on to the next adventure occupied Saturday evening. We watched nephew Josh’s high school band perform at marching contest at Muscatine. What a pleasure to see and hear the pageantry that accompanies high school marching bands. However, it was a bit nippy and the blankets to sit on and wrap up in were both greatly appreciated.
The big excitement from the weekend was skyping with my kids Friday afternoon. It was so totally an “A-Marek-N” conversation with many people talking simultaneously and lots of laughter. The seriousness was in this message!
And this one . . .
So my final words for this weekend (courtesy of a vendor on Melrose Avenue), and I’m sticking to it . . .
Slice of Life 31: Farewell Finale
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Wow! 31 consecutive days of writing is coming ot an end . . . What do I say? What am I thinking? What will I do with my free time?
My process: I set up a folder on my desk top where I saved pictures that I wanted to consider adding to blogs. I created a word document and listed “Topics that I can blog about.” I drafted some posts in Word and some directly in WordPress. I did some “flash drafting.” I watched “Be Inspired” and the Classroom SOLSC14 for writing tips/ideas. My routine included drafting my posts the evening before needed and then the morning of posting, I reviewed, revised and edited.
Some posts seemed to write themselves. Those were on topics that I had already spent some time thinking about. Newer topics meant that I nothing written ahead of time. Those posts took longer to construct unless the topic had been the focus of conversation previously. Days spent traveling meant that I planned ahead and wrote multiple posts in advance.
If you have been following this month, you may recall that I began March with a post about alphabet books and the fact that I like to collect them because they are so neat and tidy. I also like to collect or organize my work. Sometimes I organize by color, sometimes I organize by numbers, and sometimes I organize by charts. So for this finale, I have assembled a table in order to review the “current data.” (Just a little OCD!)
Slice | Title | Content | Format (*idea from TWT) |
1 | March Challenge: Slice of Life | Alphabet as an Organizer | Narrative/ Info |
2 | ABC’s of Reading | Joys of Reading | ABC poem |
3 | Home | Defining Home | Narr. Quotes and info |
4 | “Change of Plans” | Waiting | Narr. Quote and poem |
5 | Coming Home | Celebration | Narr. Pictures/poem |
6 | Bucket List | List | *poem / Info |
7 | Exhaustion | A “To Do” list | poem |
8 | Studying Student Writing | Content – 3rd grade Ts | Narrative |
9 | #EdCampIowa and “Can Do” Prep for Writing | Talk Before Writing (Conversation Lines) | Info |
10 | Embrace Change | Quote & Dr. Seuss | Picture and words= pt. |
11 | Challenges | Typical responses to challenges | Info |
12 | Tenacity | Dad and turning point | Narrative |
13 | From Challenges to Turning Points | TCRWP and turning points | *AGC, Info |
14 | Road Trip with Dad | Moving Home from College | Narrative (cum. Poem)C &C |
15 | Two Truths and a Lie | Comparisons: Dad and Me | Reader interaction |
16 | The Truth and the Answers | Comparisons: Dad and Me | Answers / Explan. |
17 | Family | Family | Narr. Acrostic poem |
18 | Support Systems | Thanks (metaphor tree) | Info |
19 | Hunger Games | Books vs. Movies | Info w/ poll |
20 | Changing Seasons | Sports cycles | poem |
21 | 6:15 on Friday | AM events | *Poem |
22 | Saturday | TCRWP and data (19) | Info |
23 | How much reading is enough? | Reflective questions | Quotes |
24 | Maximizing Instructional Time | Talk and small groups | Twitter quotes |
25 | Are you in the pool? | Writing your story | Quotes/blogs |
26 | Try it, You WILL LIKE it! | Memory (inner talk) | Narrative/inner dialogue |
27 | Summers | Memories | *Poem |
28 | Revising or Editing | CCSS.Anchor.W.5 | Info |
29 | :: right now :: | Status check | Narr. *Verb list/poem |
30 | Thank You! | Thanks | Info |
31 | Farewell Finale | Reflection on March Writing | Narr, Info |
Trying to “label posts” for the final column was difficult. Writing is not always just “one” form or format. Multiple forms can be compiled very easily in a blog post format. I had several goals with this challenge:
1. Write 31 posts Done
2. Write some stories / narratives 11 / 31
3. Write some poetry 11 / 31
4. Add pictures more frequently to my blog 11 / 31
5. Continue to grow my own knowledge in writing (tried something new * 5/31)
6. Continue to support teachers who teach reading/writing 8/3 1
Because I did not write any of my goals in a measurable, SMART format, my thoughts about whether I have “met” my goals is purely subjective. I do believe that just like a story arc, I have moved to a different point as I end March with more frequent and more proficient writing – a different place than where I began on March 1st.
Thanks again for being a part of my writing journey!
I would highly recommend that ALL “Slicers” consider having a twitter presence! One more communication tool!
Slice of Life 30: Thank You!
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Kudos to the fabulous team at Two Writing Teachers and all the support that they assembled for this challenge! Being a part of a community like this makes it “easier” to continue on each day! Thanks to both Stacey Shubitz, SOLSC14, and Anna Gratz Cockerille, Classroom SOLSC14, for their great “Be Inspired” ideas! Thanks to the support team as well. I had many questions for Elsie and her supportive responses soothed my apprehensions!
I jumped into this challenge because of two twitter friends, Julieanne Harmatz (AKA @jarhartz ) who blogs at “To Read To Write To Be” and Catherine Flynn (AKA @flynn_catherine) who blogs at “Reading to the Core.” Check out the past slices on the blogs of these two talented ladies!
Thanks to all “Slicers” who read and commented on my blog during the “Slice of Life Challenge.” Special thanks to those who commented a LOT including: Julieanne, Tara, Catherine, Anna, Elsie, Stacey and Carol.
Writing every day for a month has helped me continue to work on my own writing. I will reflect on forms and topics tomorrow in my final post for the month. It’s possible that I will join “Slice of Life Tuesday” or another regular weekly posting. I must do some work on my calendar to determine feasibility over the next couple of months as I modify an online graduate course and also plan for summer work. This month has shown me, again, how important it is to both respond to other bloggers and/or tweet out their links. The connections in the community are THE BEST!
But most importantly, this Slice of Life Challenge has confirmed my belief that teachers of writing must also be writers!
Again, Thanks! This has been fun! This has been great learning! This has fueled my writing soul!
Slice of Life 28: Revising or Editing
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
What is Revision? What is Editing?
How would you explain the difference between these two processes? In the CCSS, they are listed in the same anchor standard: “W.5. Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.”
What is revising?
Once we define “revising” as literally meaning to “see again,” to look at something from a fresh, critical perspective, we can begin to teach it. I used to use instruction that included “two stars and a wish” where partners respond with two elements of writing they like and one they wish that could be changed to strengthen the writing work. It wasn’t specific enough.
How do we make the revision more visible to students? Revising word choice has seemed easier to model. “Circle two words in the work that seem repetitive, tired, or not clear. Brainstorm possible words that would be stronger. Make a decision to change at least one word in your writing piece.”
What was missing?
I wondered if the instruction needed to focus a bit more on the “why” for revision in order to emphasize that the purpose is to make the writing stronger. Students studying written work answered: “Which of these two paragraphs is a stronger description? Be prepared to state the specific details that are your evidence of strength.” The before and after paragraphs are side by side here as they were projected on the screen:
Which would you rather read? Why? How did those sentences change? What does their “revising language” sound like when the students are talking about revising?
I did show the students the following list that I created when I brainstormed some ideas about how this old house looked and the underlined phrases showed where I had used them.
How the house looked?
- paint peeling
- cracked windows
- weeds around the house
- big house that takes up most of the lot
- two stories
- shutters falling off the side of the house
So this revision instruction began with students studying two pieces of writing to see the revising changes and then ended with showing them how a brainstormed list of “how it looked” was used for specific ideas that were added, removed and substituted. The students loved that they knew the house was “old” without saying the word “kind of like a riddle.”
Student revision is now about more than just moving a sentence around as students talk about changing words or phrases as they move, add, remove or substitute in the revision process.
What is editing?
Editing has often been explained as what a copy editor does to fix up the writing to get it ready for publication. The goal is to make the errors so few that the reader’s thinking is not interrupted as he/she reads. Typical conventions include capitalization, punctuation, spelling and usage. In the Core those are found in the Language Anchor Standards:
L. 1. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
L. 2. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
How does instruction provide opportunities to “self-edit” in order to strengthen their writing? Technology makes this easier as squiggles under a word alert me to check the spelling, but students need to be doing the work of “editing” – not the teacher with a red pen.
How does that instruction work? One way to literally show the difference between revising and editing might be to teach some acronyms as a part of a mini-lesson after a lesson in revising like the one above where students did the work to figure out “how” the revision happened.
I believe this photo came from a #tcrwp friend but I apologize because I cannot credit the owner as I was not saving the source or the date at that time. Let me know if you recognize the source as I would love to add the correct attribution!
How are your students strengthening their writing by revising or editing? Do they “independently” revise or edit?
Slice of Life 27: Summers
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
I am building on Anna Gratz Cockerille’s post from yesterday, based on work by Ralph Fletcher at #tcrwp last summer. (Don’t take my word for it! Go read the post so you know exactly how to write this kind of poem!)
SUMMERS
Sometimes I remember
the good old days
Walking the bean fields to remove
the cockleburs and corn
Playing baseball with the cousins
in front of the barn
Eating Muscatine melons
and celebrating the summer
Swimming lessons at the park
grocery shopping after
Bike rides around the block
some days, all the way to Riverside
I still can’t imagine
anything better than that.
What do you remember about your childhood summers?
(Check out Anna Gratz Cockerille’s post from yesterday for more information about creating this type of poem!)
Slice of Life 26: Try it, You WILL LIKE it!
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Do you remember sitting at the dinner table with a plate in front of you with some completely un-recognizable stinky food? And what did the responsible parent say, “Try it, you will like it.” What was that food for you? Something exotic like caviar or escargot? Or something simpler like kohlrabis or asparagus?
Picture this: my older sister is home from nurses’ training. The first “boy friend” is due for lunch. We’re a family of six kids so there is no special menu much to my dismay. “Why can’t we cook more than one chicken? Rats, Spanish rice. Why can’t we have a special meal?” are just a few of the questions rattling around inside my brain. I know enough to not ask it out loud because silly questions at the table could mean more chores to do.
The table is crowded. The skillet of Spanish rice is in the center. We take turns scooping up portions. “No heathens here. We are polite.” A vegetable bowl is passed. Quiet descends as we clear our plates. Then the visitor, the new boy friend says, “Pass the green beans, please. Those are really good.”
Startled, I look at my sister. She looks down. I look at Mom and she just shakes her head. So I look down. I want to say, “They aren’t green beans, buddy!” but I know if I do there will be consequences.
We are almost finished when Dad gets home and joins us at the table. He asks for the vegetable, “Pass the asparagus, please.”
I wince. Will he laugh? Did he even hear? Who is this city slicker who doesn’t know the difference between green beans and asparagus? Then we hear, “You know, they did taste a bit different. But I’m color blind, and they look just like green beans to me.” We still thought he was a “rube.”
Asparagus is/was a favorite food for many at our house. I loved the Minneapolis IRA conference a few years ago because every restaurant we went to had asparagus on the menu. A co-worker hated every restaurant we went to because every dinner included asparagus. She saw no redeeming qualities in asparagus. She has moved on, but I am thinking of sending her this recipe to see if she wants another “go” at asparagus.
Crispy Baked Asparagus Fries
Ingredients:
1 pound asparagus, trimmed
1/2 cup flour
2 eggs, lightly beaten
3/4 cup panko breadcrumbs
1/4 cup grated parmesan
salt and pepper to tasteDirections:
Dredge the asparagus in the flour, dip them in the egg and then into a mixture of the panko breadcrumbs, parmesan, salt and pepper.
Place the asparagus on a wire rack on a baking sheet and bake in a preheated 425 oven until golden brown, about 7-13 minutes.
Do Crispy Baked Asparagus Fries sound good to you?
This story lives on . . .
I couldn’t type this story without laughing. It’s a favorite story that is recounted every time “anyone” in the family brings a new person to “meet” the family. The details vary according to the memories of that particular sibling. When my younger sister emailed this recipe, one response was, “Maybe we should call them ‘Crispy Baked Green Bean Fries'” and another sibling responded with, “Then – – – – -, (brother-in-law) would eat them!”
Poor guy. Still being picked on decades later!
Do you remember being “told” that you would like something, but the romance quickly fizzled and you really didn’t even like whatever the something was?
Does that happen to our children? Are they told, “Here, read this story today! You will love it, because I loved it when I was a student!”
Or even worse, “I STILL love it, but I haven’t really read it during the last five years.”
(And if you are lucky, the student ONLY thinks and does not shout out loud, “WOW! This is so lame. There is no way that I will ever like this story!”)
When have you been told to “try it, you will like it?” Was it really that simple? Did you like it?
Slice of Life 24: Maximizing Instructional Time
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
How do teachers maximize time for student benefits?
Tip One: Increase talk time of students in order for them to solidify their learning. A very specific tip was shared by Lucy Calkins at the Spring Saturday Reunion at Teachers College.
Five minutes. Find five minutes for students to talk after they have been reading. No cost. No text dependent questions. No quiz.
“TALK!” – Lucy Calkins
Chapter 1 “Why Talk is Important in Classrooms” from Doug Fisher and Nancy Frey’s Content Area Conversations will give you additional ideas about the value of talk including “Reading and writing float on a sea of talk.”
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Tip Two: Maximize your use of small groups across the day from Shanna B Schwartz. “Weave small groups across the day, through reading workshop, writing workshop and word study periods.” Use small groups to help students meet targets and accelerate learning!
Another source of information about “small group” instruction is Debbie Diller’s Making the Most of Small Groups: Differentiation for All. In this book Diller also explains the difference between guided reading groups and small groups working on such skills as comprehension, fluency, vocabulary, etc. The goals of the group are determined by the data upon which they are formed!
How do you use TALK after reading to improve comprehension? How do you use small groups across the day?
Slice of Life 21: 6:15 on a Friday
(During March, I am blogging daily as a part of the Slice of Life Story Challenge!) Special thanks to the hosts of the Slice of Life Challenge: Stacey, Tara, Dana, Betsy, Anna and Beth. More Slice of Life posts can be found at Two Writing Teachers .
Today’s idea courtesy of Stacey under 3/20/14 “Be Inspired” with original from @MrsDay75 “8:15 on a School Day.”
6:15 on a Friday
It’s 6:15 am
Tick, tock
Pour a cup of coffee
Tick, tock
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Check the weather
Tick, tock
Check email
Tick, tock
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Check my Twitter Stream.
Retweet,
Favorite,
Mention,
Check for slices.
Tick, Tock
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Grab the carafe
Pour a second cup
Watch the news
Begin my list
Tick, tock.
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Let the dog out
Feed and water
Check my grocery list
Tonight’s the night
to grocery shop.
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Start the car.
Hit defrost.
Turn up the heat
Calendar says, “spring”
The day says, “cold.”
Tick, tock.
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Rinse out coffee cup,
Fill travel mug,
Brush my teeth,
Pack up and GO,
On the road,
Off to school!
Tick, tock!